Wednesday, 26 September 2007

26th Sept

I began to improve my single pitch for my main idea. I changed it to suit the review on it when i first did the pitch. I added more information about my product, and took ouot everything i felt unneccessary.
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1 comment:

Nick Lacey said...

it's pointless writing so little. You should explain how you changed it and why this is an improvement.

30 September 2007 at 01:24

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